I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
In our hurumanu music we have been doing slides about 1900's to 2010's singer or band, you have to work with a buddy so I am working with Miguel. So this is our 1900's to 2010's Singer work I hope you like it.
Thank you for sharing your Music slides with us. It looks like you did a nice job creating some eye catching slides with Miguel with only a few things not finished. Something really important to remember in research is to make sure that your facts are correct!
Your 2010 slide talks about Drake being an American rapper, but actually, Drake is from Toronto, Canada where I used to live! He also owns part of our very famous basketball team.
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Hi Gerald
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your Music slides with us. It looks like you did a nice job creating some eye catching slides with Miguel with only a few things not finished. Something really important to remember in research is to make sure that your facts are correct!
Your 2010 slide talks about Drake being an American rapper, but actually, Drake is from Toronto, Canada where I used to live! He also owns part of our very famous basketball team.
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