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Friday, 24 May 2019

3G4G Guang Shan Buddhist Temple


Author: Buddy: Cody W
Buddy Comment: Great job. I read the story and did some editing and lots of the things were correct. I just suggested some things. Apart from that keep it up :)
On Tuesday of 14th may we went to buddhist temple.  We did a lot of things there, like watching short videos, making a flower out of paper and also they gave us some snacks. It was really fun to go there, I’ve been there before last year It’s really good for year 7’s to go there so they can experience it.

We watched a short video about buddha,  the video is about doing good things like doing good deeds, Say good words, think good thoughts, give hope, give convenience, and give joy. They use those word  as a name of the festival, it’s called 3G4G festival.

The coolest thing there is when they gave us a tour in every room and they showed us what they have there. My favourite part is when they gave us some snacks and  we made a flower out of paper. It was really fun. I hope that more people will come to the temple.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Gerald

    Can you have another look, this is running off the page!

    - Miss Birtch

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