Today in hurumanu I've been DLO about music and band. So we have to choose a musician and talk about all his facts and also in band you have to choose a band in new zealand and talk about their facts like how did their band started. So this is my DLO about music and band, I hope you like it.
Great job Gerald on taking feedback to improve your work, you added in some great eye catching photos. Next time, make sure all of your capitals are in the right place, for example, New Zealand.
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