I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
We are learning about the importance of oceans to the world. we have started by looking at the pastics issue in social studies The Great Pacific Garbage Patch. Thi is my slide show on it.
Wow Gerald,I like how you presented your research and the amount of information put into your slideshow. It is very important for us to recycle and reduce the use of plastic which we should do more often. I like that you included a little blurb at the top but next time try to add more information on what we are learning about and what our main focus was. Also in slide 3-4 there was a lot of writing so I suggest that next time you could try adding paragraphs so it is easier to read and follow through what you have written and add videos about the relating topic. Overall this is some impressive work, keep up the great work and have a good day.
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Wow Gerald,I like how you presented your research and the amount of information put into your slideshow. It is very important for us to recycle and reduce the use of plastic which we should do more often. I like that you included a little blurb at the top but next time try to add more information on what we are learning about and what our main focus was. Also in slide 3-4 there was a lot of writing so I suggest that next time you could try adding paragraphs so it is easier to read and follow through what you have written and add videos about the relating topic. Overall this is some impressive work, keep up the great work and have a good day.
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