I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thank you for sharing your All Blacks DLO. I wonder if next time you can include an introduction and some more writing about the activity we completed. It's great to share your poster but it doesn't tell us what we have been learning about.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Kamusta Gerald
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your All Blacks DLO. I wonder if next time you can include an introduction and some more writing about the activity we completed. It's great to share your poster but it doesn't tell us what we have been learning about.
- Miss Birtch