Today we've been doing about science experiment. So I am going to talk about what we did in science experiment.
Mr. Palmer did some experiment about vinegar and baking soda. So he grab 2 cups and put it in the tray and after that he grab a baking soda and a vinegar.
Mr. Palmer pour the baking soda into a cup and after he finish putting the baking soda the next step he did is he pour the vinegar into the cup with a baking soda.
The vinegar and baking soda get mixed up and it make some reaction and it looks like a bubble when it explode.
It was a really nice experiences to see the vinegar and baking soda get mixed up and it explode, I already did that experiment but that was like 2 years ago. i really like the experiment we did for science. So this is what we did for science experiment.
Hi Gerald.
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job explaining what Mr Palmer's experiment was and I like how you included a personal note about what you thought and felt about the experiment.
Next time I would like to see you clearly sticking to the points you have written in your writing plan and making your writing more instructional. I will award you the point for this activity, as your recount of the task was clear and we could recreate the experiment based on your instructions.
- Miss Birtch