I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thank you for sharing your link to you group's advertisement. To improve this post I think you could write a short description about your DLO and why you were creating it.
I know what it is for because I am your teacher for B+E, but other readers might be unsure what you are sharing with us.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Gerald
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your link to you group's advertisement. To improve this post I think you could write a short description about your DLO and why you were creating it.
I know what it is for because I am your teacher for B+E, but other readers might be unsure what you are sharing with us.
- Miss Birtch