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Thursday, 11 April 2019

Hurumanu Music

The best birthday that I've celebrated is when I turn 12 years old, It was the best day ever for me, When I celebrated my 12 year old birthday, I wasn't expecting that my wish is gonna happen that time. I was really happy when I see my dad my dad was carrying a puppy my tears just got dried because of my happiness.

In my whole living years the friend I only have is my dog, I treated him as my friend,  All people in my school hated me and nobody wants to be friends with me, until when I get older and older I realised that i don't need a friends anymore because I already have one, my dog is always being their for me which is makes me really happy. 

When I played football in my high school nobody wants to be friends with me, nobody wants to talk to me, everyone were laughing at my braces, when i got home i just cried a lot, my dog was looking at me and he came to me like he was wondering what's happening, when i was trying to covered my eyes my dog tried to not covered my eyes and that makes me really happy I smiled at him and covered my braces and then he tried to not to do that to my self,

He was like showing me that I am not ugly and his like showing me that I shouldn't get embarrassed if someone laugh at my braces, After that it makes all thing clear to me. My dog was a really really good friend, he always stand up for me like a real human. One day When I just got back to my school I saw my dog laying in the ground and I was really shock and panic.

I called my dad in his room to bring the dog to a dog hospital, then we tried to ask the doctor what happened to him the doctor said he's really weak now he has only several minutes to live when I heard that I cried a lot, I was like I don't have a friend anymore, it broke my heart. I couldn't eat that much because i kept on thinking about my dog.

After 11 years, I already had a happy family now, I was really happy that something came to me that would make me feel a lot better.

1 comment:

  1. Gerald, this was a beautiful piece of creative writing. I really liked how much time and effort you put into completing this blogging task. This is really showing your commitment.

    My feedback is to always make sure when you say "I" that it is in capital letters. I is just like a name.

    - Miss Birtch

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