WALT: write a description using the correct structure and language features.
Success Criteria: My description will include an introduction, characteristics and evaluation. With nouns, adjectives and present tense verbs.We have been writing For weather. First we write are sentence about weather and we write are hook and we write how you feeling when you see good storm we just write this all about weather.
Do you feel the very very hot sun? Nice and warm outside is sunny.
Weather is the condition of atmosphere at any given time and place. Weather changes all the time.
It’s hot today can you feel the hot sun in the sky?
Its light blue. When the sky is light blue it’s beautiful and looks fresh wind and the air look fresh. Sometimes the weather is not good. It's raining sometimes, is sunny and sometimes the weather is always raining. When its raining it's cold and it’s like freezing. When it rains in middle of the night and stop and you are walking to the way you can see the grass is freezing and the pool and the road. When sunny and so very very hot do you feel your skin? it´s burning when you swim. Your skin itĹ going to be red, that's called sunburn.
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am happy when I see storm. When I see storm on outside of my house I am watching and I am warm on the inside it’s feel nice.
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Positive - Something done well.
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